Lost

by ImNotPerfect20   Apr 18, 2007


I try to get through everyday.
But without you i am lost.
You were the one who held me up
You don't even care, we don't talk
You said we would still be friends
You told me you loved me
Why did you have to lie?
You said you would never let go.
You told me you were mine.

(Not one of my best.. but i had a horrible Headache.. i will go back and edit it later.)

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  • 16 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Maybe it wasnt your best but there was emotion and it flowed well, and although it was short, it worked well
    well done
    xxxxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Kalee

    This is a really nice poem, about a lost love. you could really feel the emotion you put into it. 5/5

    Kalee

  • 17 years ago

    by TracyM

    You said this one wasnt one of your best, but I still liked it. You could really feel the sadness and emotion within this poem.

  • 17 years ago

    by Amanda

    I like it still

  • 17 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Yah this is not one of ur best but i think this is still nice and very appreciated work..4/8

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