Crystal Blue

by Gem   Apr 19, 2007


Crystal blue waters
Shimmering with reflections
Of the scorching orb

*Gem*

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Haiku - is an unrhymed Japanese verse consisting of three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables (5, 7, 5) or 17 syllables in all. Haiku is usually written in the present tense and focuses on nature (seasons).

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  • 18 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Good imagery and word choice. Since the Haiku form is so short, they are sometimes hard to pull off, you have done an excellent job!

  • 18 years ago

    by Twisted Heart

    Gem,

    I'm sure I have said this to you before, but I so envy those who can write a Haiku. So much beauty wrapped up in so few words. You did a great job on this.

    Always,
    Jeannie

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Very nice! Great choice of word usuage too!

    Natalie``

  • 18 years ago

    by Debbie

    This is a wonderful Haiku. The descriptions vividly paint a brilliant picture of the golden sun's reflection on the water--as clear as crystal. Nice work, ma'dear! =]
    Love,
    Debbie

  • 18 years ago

    by Romantic Lover

    Great Haiku. When I close my eyes, I can see myself laying on a raft on the cystal blue waters. Relaxing.
    BTW - that was 18 syllables. Just giving you a hard time :)

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