Odd tears and even cuts

by Krysten   Apr 27, 2007


1 tear for my broken heart, another for my pain
2 cuts for letting myself cry, it always ends the same
3 tears for your goodbye, another for your mistake
4 cuts for not being good enough, its all to much to take
5 tears for our lost friendship, another for our fight
6 cuts for not holding on, can i do anything right
7 tears for letting you go, another for the end
8 cuts for caring too much,i just cant seem to win
9 tears for the cuts on my arm, another for the ending i need
10 cuts to end it all tonight, my pain you'll never see

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  • 16 years ago

    by Melpomene

    The title of this poem really caughty my eye, I found it to be quite capturing and interesting. This was different quite unique to tell you the truth. I did enjoy it. An emotion packed piece which was written to be beautifully sad. Keep on writing you seem to have some major talent in writing the sad and depressing poems. Great work. 5/5 from me. ~mel

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    This is a different variety for sure, you have written it in a different perspective. Its really nice. Keep up the nice work!!
    tc

  • 17 years ago

    by ChevyCowgirl23

    Alright gurl u got major talent!!!!! :) i know how you feel ive been there!!! if ya need to talk im here! smiles and big hugs!
    amanda

  • 17 years ago

    by xXroxyXx

    I love your poem its amazing 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by SiLeNtLy ScReAmInG

    Sad, but an awesome poem. I really liked how it was written and how you encorperated the title into it.

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