Last Words

by Tricky Daze   May 1, 2007


Words were all on my mind
They had a great way
To say and not to stay
On my last dark day
Maybe i affected you
Or you got used to me
But i have enough for plea
On my last dark day
You may take the knives
Away from me to protect
But have bleeds without detect
On my last dark day
I don't want to feel your teardrops
Please you all don't make it hard
I will have my angel on way to ward
On my last dark day

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  • 16 years ago

    by Esther

    Sad, but not depressing, its good that I'm not incredibly emotional at the mo, or I might have started crying!

  • 16 years ago

    by StormyStar

    You have so mugh emotion and you show it when you write thats what i like about you. you are very talented..

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Very Beautiful poem!.....i loved it!!..very well written!
    Kp writing!

  • 16 years ago

    by Seronum

    Very deep and dark, i like this poem keep up the good work! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Nick who Plays Pool

    Don't feel that way Laura and don't leave.

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