Truly Faithful (contest)

by Choose xX Alex Xx Life   May 6, 2007


The time did come once,
Where i was close to the end,
The final flame on the candle,
Sick of having to pretend.

I fought my way to the top,
So that boys at school would like me,
I did things i shouldn't have,
I lost the respect i had for me.

Being past around you friends,
Like I was some kind of doll,
A Barbie; Perfect figure and hair,
Believing thats all i was good for.

Along came the 'gangster'
Claiming it was me he shall save,
Laughing at your pitiful tries,
Crying inside, 'I know your game'.

One day i let go of myself,
And allowed you to share my life,
You protected me from bad,
Wiping the tears i had cried.

It took a year and a half,
For you to gain my trust,
You waited patiently you knew my past,
You certainly proved your love.

You formed this strong woman,
For that i am forever grateful,
My heart is in your debt,
And to you ill be truly faithful.

1st May 2007

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  • 16 years ago

    by Robert

    This was a very nice poem and I think the guy that gave you the courage to trust again shouyld be commended great read Plot121

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    This is so beautiful and sweet...I loved the transition from sad and lost to happy and grateful.

    The flow was good throughout the entire piece and the imagery painted was beautiful.

    My favourite part has to be the last stanza, I found it to be incredibly sweet and moving.

  • 16 years ago

    by JR13

    Damn this poem is throwed! its all gangsta love 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by David

    Excellent, beautiful.. truely great poem. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Great poem. Another 5/5.