The anatomy of a teenage girl

by Marie   May 7, 2007


Take apart my mind
what do you think you'll find?

You'll find curiosity and wonder
delight and enticement
joy in the little things
and with the big things excitement

look into my eyes
and prepare for the surprise

see my originality
see my fun
see my desire to do everything
until it's all done

Take apart my heart
and what's amongst the art?

love lost, love gained
a hint of regret
a hall of all the cute guys
I would have ever met

Look into my soul
tell me of its role

Tell me of it's love
Tell me of it's pureness
But most of all tell me
Of it's total unsureness

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  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    How cute :) I like the emotions running in this poem. flow was smooth! Good job! keep it up! ;)

  • 16 years ago

    by Perfection

    I like this idea... The taking apart makes the poem stronger in a way.. The ending stanza was good and the two last lines were a great ending in my opinion...

    Overall great work =D

  • 16 years ago

    by Melpomene

    The flow was great throughout this poem it showed strong emotions and was a really interesting read.Well done with this piece of poetry keep up the good work~mel

  • 17 years ago

    by Wallace

    Excellent poem, you really have a talent, the flow was excellent and showed some emotions in the poem. Great job, keep it up.

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