Black Thorne

by omgitsmina   May 14, 2007


Anger, lust, envy, bitterness, and greed
All the repugnant sins that make us bleed
Tear out your heart, so wistful and forlorn
Relinquish it to the prick of the black thorne

The thorne of malace, the safegaurd of death
Will stab at your side, pain in every passing breath
The thorne of ages, so unpropitiously nefarious
The thorne fills your life with danger precarious

Anger, lust, envy, bitterness, and greed
All the repugnant sins that make us bleed
Tear out your heart, so wistful and forlorn
Relinquish it to the prick of the black thorne

Terrible tales of terror to compose
Fruitless deeds of darkness to expose
Bloodied, crimson sins unmasked in repose
The putrid nature of man, so I suppose

Anger, lust, envy, bitterness, and greed
All the repugnant sins that make us bleed
Tear out your heart, so wistful and forlorn
Relinquish it to the prick of the black thorne

Surrender all of your hope, the will to live
Never reflect on your existance, never forgive
Your woe-filled mercy is waisted on them
The thorne will decide to whom to condem

Anger, lust, envy, bitterness, and greed
All the repugnant sins that make us bleed
Tear out your heart, so wistful and forlorn
Relinquish it to the prick of the black thorne

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  • 12 years ago

    by Phantasmagoria

    It sounds like some badass metal song.

  • 12 years ago

    by Joseph K Apanian

    Very good.. well done.. keep up the good style

  • 12 years ago

    by shawn

    I love the way you worded the repetitive chorus type stanza, and the grammer was great, it's rare to find a peice overall that is as well writen as this. 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Roxy

    Wow, I am speechless. I really enjoyed reading this poem the vocabulary was amazing. Never seen something like this in my life!! xxxMuch love from Roxy Keep up the amazing work xxxx

  • 12 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This is an amazing poem that exposes the darknes to the light of truth ...well written