The Power of Being Unanswered

by Corruption   May 17, 2007


The flowing anger
the unrelenting hatred
the feeling of murder
coursing through my veins
want to feel the blood
of a dying man
ooze through my fingers
like that sands of time

the flowing anger
fueling this rage
wanting to kill
those who have wronged me
to see their eyes fade
to see them take their final breath
I want myself to be their final sight
their son, the one they don�t appreciate

the flowing anger
caused by refusal
never given a reason
if I had been answered
I would have been satisfied
I wouldn�t be angry
I wouldn�t hate them
everything would be fine

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  • 16 years ago

    by Melpomene

    I liked this one i found the emotions to be deep and dark which was great to read. Just need to fix those little letter things thatpop up i know you will know what i mean. other then that well done on this nicely written poem~mel

  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    THis is a good one! well done! the emotions was raw! flow was good keep writing! and uhm. Just edit your poem to remove the weird letters :P

  • 16 years ago

    by Alissa

    Wow, this was so full of emotion. great job...*shudders* wow.

    alissa

  • 16 years ago

    by robin milford

    This is a good one keep up the great work thanks for the comment

  • 16 years ago

    by Connor

    Awesome I love IT!!!!!!
    GOOD JOB I WANT YOU TO WRITE MORE!!!!

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