Dear Shona

by Goran Rahim   May 18, 2007


Dear Shona,
You tell me
What is happening to me?
Since that evening
You are the only face
My eyes can see.

Dear Shona,
Doesn't that sound weird to you?
A guy who you even didn't know
Awhile ago,
Now he cannot live without you.

Dear Shona
From the evening I saw you
Like a movie theme.
Since then,
you became an actress in my every dream.

* Shona means pretty or pretty girl in Bengali language.

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  • 16 years ago

    by BrokenREALiTy

    Dear Shona
    From the evening I saw you
    Like a movie theme.
    Since then,
    you became an actress in my every dream.
    `Perfect ending, dear . Absolutely perfect .

    I thought Shona was a name xDD The poem was sweet . Cheesy, yet not at the same time . You never dissappoint, do you ? (:
    This was simply wonderful .
    ..__MiNDYY

  • 16 years ago

    by keshawna

    This is a wonderful poem its really beautiful

  • 16 years ago

    by hani

    I love it , its very nice and beautiful good work 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Hmm, i think ur kind of scary as it has nothing with stalking or anything like that so i dont know where u got that from? u sure u have read the right poem????
    just wondering

  • 16 years ago

    by Startle Me

    Actually.
    This was pretty scary to me.
    Lol.
    I thought about a stalker.
    You stalking the pretty girl.
    Just because... well she's pretty.
    I'm weird, huh?
    All in all,
    The poem was okay.
    I've read better from you.
    I thought it was really
    Interesting that you used
    A different language, though
    That sounds like a name.
    I loved that.
    But still, it's kind of sweet, kind of scary.
    Your topic's kind of cliched.
    Kind of not.
    So my dear,
    I'm going to have to give you a 5/5 :]