Let me breathe

by isabel   May 19, 2007


Let me breathe, let me cry
Let me live, let me die
Let me think with my own mind
It's not my fault that you are blind

It's not my fault that you decide
To forget the soul inside
It's not my fault you use your eyes
To bury others in your lies

Let me breathe, let me see
The soul that cries to me
Wishing your heart wasn't black
Drown in guilt, my pain is back

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  • 18 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    I love it's flow, it's really easy to read, yet it has a deep message.

  • 18 years ago

    by skynerraw

    Wow......amazing!!! Really enjoyable read, with perfect rhymes, and perfect flow.....nothing else to say......just amazing!

  • 18 years ago

    by Vanessa

    The flow was absoulty flawlessly perfect. I really loved that. The word choice was the best, and the emtion was clear. Great job 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Oh christ!!!..so so beautiful....very good write.....simple n filled with lotsa emotions which made the poem look Great!...n the last stanza was Amazing!!.....

    kp it up!

    5/5:-)

    xxPoojaxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Lost Soul 691

    Elequently said! Very nice write.

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