Best friends. [acrostic]

by ASPHYXIATED   May 22, 2007


Betrayal dipped in a bittersweet coating,
Exhausted lies after each dramatic excuse,
Sympathy replaced with uncontrollable loathing,
Tragic revenge tactics after each lame truce.

Forbidden secrets slipping off a bitten tongue,
Ridiculed and out-casted, the revenge has just begun.
Injured egos filled with complete self disgust,
Emotionless and broken, Torn apart by "trust".
Negligent views soon come to an unexpected end,
Disowned rejects return to the betraying friend.
Sweetie, this is what they call friendship.

Lisaaa.

For Trick =]

    report violation
0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 16 years ago

    by stacyneedsyou x3

    I absolutely love it.
    lots of big words, hard for me to understand.
    but i read it through a couple times and understood it.

    fantastic work.
    keep it up!

  • 16 years ago

    by Molly Elizabeth

    Very nice poem! I like it a lot! Love your word choice... you are a very talented writer!!

    Molly

  • 16 years ago

    by XxWorthlessxX

    Lisa, this is a veryy good poem. I loves it. You are an amazing writer. Strong emotion and gret use of words. Excellent job. 5/5

    `-jackie.

  • 16 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Such a deep friendship poem, not at all what I had expected, the flow was great, the word choice was amazing, and the emtion was strong. You did an excellent job here, really 5/5 even though I wish i could give you more

  • 16 years ago

    by xoxShorteexox

    -=Steals some of Lee-sah's talent!=- Gosh, babe. You're an amazing poet, don't ever believe otherwise. That was an amazing acrostic. I loved all the words you chose. It was just that great, Sweetie. xxxx
    Take care, love.
    5/5
    -Heater

Read All Comments (16)

More Poems By ASPHYXIATED