An Illusion Called Poem

by Tricky Daze   May 23, 2007


Like a guy fallen in love waiting,
For the valuable time of gathering
To touch her heart again and again,
This is what is a paper to a pen.

Like a meaningful letter you write,
To affect the recipient or just to excite.
Generally the feelings are hidden in it;
Waits to be solved like a password.

Like a sad movie within the lines,
Shows all the sorrow and secrets that whines.
You can see teardrops between the stanzas,
Or the happiness that will fill you in.

Like a death of someone you care,
Say goodbye to leave the reader to bear.
You have to seal it with your name,
Deliver it because maybe someone will read.

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  • 16 years ago

    by The Sky is Falling

    Aww this is so sad, but wirtten so well. I love it. Keep writing the amazing poems. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    Great poem. From start to finish I was drawn into this poem. The flow was great and I loved the aabc rhyming scheme. The first stanza and the last line of the last stanza are my favourite parts of this poem. 5/5

    -Shannon <3

  • 16 years ago

    by Adelle

    I loved this poem I have read a lot of poems but never a poem about poems this really was fantastic I usally give ideas on how to make poems better but when it comes to yours I have difficulty with a mejority of them as they seam to be very good.

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    This is beautiful, very moving.
    I found this to be original and unique in concept, a refreshing read.
    The imagyer portrayed was beautifully done, and the flow was flawless throughout.

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    Laura this poem has a sort of uniqueness in it. I really love the way you have worded n written it. Max ratings.

    With love
    Fsams

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