Holiday

by Allison   May 27, 2007


Tick Tock Tick Tock
All that fills my mind
Tick Tock Tick Tock
Erasing all my sanity

Minutes moving by like snails,
Teachers droning on and on,
Subjects no one cares about,
But only one more day.

Hours like a turtle crawl
Slowly to some pleasant point,
Crying tears of boredom felt,
Only one more class.

All test papers now turned in,
Crossing fingers, hope to pass,
Seconds left to face,
Then the school bell rings.

Silent halls now filled with noise,
Students running form the hell,
Breathing in the summer air,
Now on holiday!

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  • 16 years ago

    by Mezmeryz

    Wow..i got to say i have not reada poem like this one on the whole site..lol because every single one ive read is either about depression or love etc..but this is a more varied subject..that long wait for the school day to end, just before a holiday! yay! lol great right mate, plenty of figurative language and imagery..dont stop writing! xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    I don't think that their is a greater feeling when your in school then hearing that final bell ring releasing you for the summer. To bad it never seems to last that long, always goes by way to fast. Excellent job 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Zeus

    Wow. this is a cool poem. I can totally relate because now school seem to be longer since its coming to an end. Good Job

  • 16 years ago

    by ImNotPerfect20

    This was awsome.. I really liked this.. it rhymed and flowed really well...

    I think of what i have read so far this is your best poem.. very good job.. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Alex

    I'm homeschooled so I don't relate to this one, but I thought it was great!

    ~*Alex*~