Lose you tonight (contest)

by Choose xX Alex Xx Life   May 28, 2007


Catastrophic devastation in my blood,
As i continue to fight.
Bees not butterflies in my stomach,
If i were to lose you tonight.

Air disappearing from radar,
No oxygen at all in sight.
But instead of gasping I'm grasping,
On the thought of losing you tonight.

A blanket of love, keeps me warm,
In these arms i know its right.
Underneath the Armour though i do wonder
What would i feel if i lost you tonight.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Robert

    This was a great poem in both power and description I really did enjoy the way you set this up great work Plot121

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Now this...this my dear is perfect.

    I found the whole piece to be both original and unique in concept and beautifully written.

    The depth and emotion you placed into this piece, while relatively short, was overwhelming and clear for the reader to see.

    The only thing that I didn't like was that your I's weren't capatilized, but that's just me being picky.

    On the whole, I loved this.

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    I really like this poem, you do write good love poems. It is original and you truly expressed emotions on ,I can honestly say, incredible way. Well done, whole poem has outstanding rhythm. I enjoyed in every line of this greatly written piece.

  • 16 years ago

    by 4 track demo

    Of thte ones you requested me to read, this is soooo far my fav, genuinely superb imagery, mataphors well placed, very emotional and i felt what i needed to feel, which is why i read poetry, ...great job...

  • 16 years ago

    by Devon

    I love ur work

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