Giving Away My Heart

by jarrod   Apr 19, 2004


I am to kindhearted and to caring
to loving and to sharing.
My hands are widely shown
with my heart all but known.

My feelings and thoughts revealed
breaking down my safety shield.
My heart is broken just to heal,
but every hole, i must seal.

With every piece i give away,
I will save a life someday.
One heart to give amongst so many,
but i wont charge a single penny.

Helping is reason to my life
instead to my soul brought a knife.
I will continue to give every single piece.
until my heart will dissapear and fully cease!

Have you ever kneeled down in the dirt and held the earth in your hands. This earth is our heart as a whole. It sustains and creates our life. but it is not just our beginning, it is also our end. We all will end up as earth and join as one. We must be thankful for what we have.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This poem is just too good to critcize

    but the grammar grimlins are out to get you
    I am too kindhearted and to caring
    to loving and too sharing.
    My hands are widely shown
    with my heart all but known.

    Then you put your blood on paper it is natural to seek perfection

  • 19 years ago

    by hayley williams

    Just write another poem will you, you crazy a$$. Please stop complaining old man and what is with your pic on here??

  • 20 years ago

    by hayley williams

    Hey Jar Jar, Excellent poem as per normal! You are a great poet, friend and all round guy, keep it up binks xxx

  • 20 years ago

    by paddy

    amazeingpoem,
    great use of words,
    i agree with yik on this it's wonderful.
    so much feeling and understanding
    i also give you a 5
    take care
    all my love
    lorna
    xxx