The Truth

by Live WeLL   Jun 1, 2007


I can't hold these tears in any longer,
I think you should know the truth.
This isn't going how it should..
I dont want to be with you.

You're putting me thru hell.
Can't you see what you do to me?
Does this look like a happy face?
Why can't you just let me be?

I'm sick of you. I'm over you.
We don't belong together.
You should just accept that,
Instead of forcing us to be forever.

This can't be right.
This can't be fair.
You're torturing me,
and you don't even care.

I'm a different girl.
You're a different guy.
We both need to move on.
It's time to say good-bye.

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  • 16 years ago

    by claire

    This is good - great rhyme n rhythm n all that. not to mention it was really true and well expressed :)

  • 16 years ago

    by LovingAnnabelle

    Wow.. this was a really good poem!
    i can relate to it~ because of the things im going through in life right now~ so it helps out~
    Nice job, you have a great talent~!
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    Sometimes we kind of try and force the whole forever talk, I mean people say forever in relationships everyday, but 99% don't last 6 months. We have to realize that no matter how perfect things seem to be, they won't just be perfect forever, it takes more then 2 months to see all there is to see in somebody - give love time. Amazing job as always 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Tara

    I'm sick of you. I'm over you.
    We don't belong together.
    You should just accept that,
    Instead of forcing us to be forever

    ----powerful and beautifully written...each stanza was capturing and written lovely----

    .-*tara*-.

  • 16 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Perfectly written, strong emtion, nice word choice, I really liked it it was diffrent than most poems of this type, Great job 5/5

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