What if you had the power?

What if you had the power
to help everyone in need?
To take the hands of those who've failed,
and help them to succeed?
^^^
Everyone has that power ... not to help everyone but do what they can, yet so many opt to turn a blind eye. So very sad

What if you took this power
and put it to good use?
What if you made a difference
instead of always an excuse...
^^^
After reading all 4 stanzas I knew there was something deep and true coming in the ending stanza. And upon reading it I said to myself "excellent voice in the ending stanza"

You have penned this write with the love and compassion that lays within your heart and it shines in the 2 ending lines hun.
Bravo! ~claps~ excellent message you've woven into this write.
Well done, excellent read
Luanne

Again I am stunned.
You are a great writer!

The ending is straight to the point and very clear.
The message of this poem is important.
Good job!
Great choice of words and I love the flow.

Aweeeeee.
I really, really liked this one! Better than the other one you wrote, even.
It's one of the better ones on the site, I must say.

I liked it because it flowed very well. The rhyming was perfect (no catch-ups) and the point beautiful.
You have some talent.

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex 5.5

And i thought the other one was good. these are amazing, great work!!!

This is a great poem, and it makes a point that you should reach out to others, because you can make a difference. I love the flow of this poem, and the words.