Kill me (Acrostic)

by isabel   Jun 1, 2007


Kiss me 'till I fade away
Instead of begging me to stay
Let me go, crave my heart
Listen to my voice in the dark

Merciful is the home of death
Embrace, now, my sweet, last breath

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  • 18 years ago

    by Crystal Gaze

    Short yet so beautiful.
    The emotion's run deep.
    I really enjoyed this poem.
    Well done,
    Elaine.

  • 18 years ago

    by PoeticJustice

    Very deep.
    I like your point of veiw, its very interesting.

  • 18 years ago

    by Dee

    It is beautiful.. well worded so short but explains it all... good work 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Good=)..does'nt seem like it's your first acrostic...well penned..short yet powerful!
    5/5
    Good job!
    xxPoojaxx

  • 18 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    Wow.
    Well done for a first one!
    This was great.
    I loved the simplicity of it yet it was powerful still.

    Great work =]

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