Tiny Ones

by Finalgravedigger   Jun 3, 2007


You may think I'm crazy
You may think I'm dumb
but I care for these little ones.

Putting a road in their home
running them over without a fuss
destroying what was once alive
they lay flat and
turn to dust.

You think so what and look at me
as an insane one as
I shoo them off the road
talk to them as if my own.

But you don't understand for
they live like us,
they breath like us
they want to live just like us.

These tiny ones I care so much.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Tom Swart

    I agree!!! I read your poem and found it quite an easy read and a pleasant piece. Keep up the good words. May the ebb and flow of your thoughts and emotions find a good spot to call home.

  • 16 years ago

    by Ashley

    I love that you write about stuff you care about; i love animals to death so this speaks out to me i appressiate it

  • 16 years ago

    by Reminders Torture

    THAT WAS REALLY GOOD.THE IMAGINATIVE OF THE POEM WAS EXCELLENT.KEEP UP !!

  • 16 years ago

    by The WriTer

    Amateur, me thinks u can do better

  • 16 years ago

    by Miranda

    I agree. Everyone looks at me like i'm crazy when I get sad because there is a dead animal on the sidewalk or road.

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