Take a chance.

by ASPHYXIATED   Jun 3, 2007


-Keep in mind I am trying to cure writers block.
I'm just messing around.
Its a bit stiff, but it'll do :] -

And then she asks herself ;
What are these dreams made of,
Pity lies and fake fairy-tales.
Escaping into a wonderland,
When all else in life fails.

And then she tells herself that ;
Forced happiness cures everything,
A curved smile is never real,
We are just raw flesh and bone,
Our emotional wounds cease to heal.

Once again she asks herself ;
What are these dreams made of,
Why runaway when reality exists?
A true smile may someday appear,
Take the chances, Take the risks.

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  • 16 years ago

    by xoxShorteexox

    Great piece of writing, Sweetie.
    Keep up the good work.
    ily xxx
    5/5
    - Heather

  • 16 years ago

    by Andrew

    This was very interesting and actually a bit surprising to read, much different structure than you've done before, and it works well imo. Well done and well written.

  • 16 years ago

    by GoodMorning

    Liiiiiiisa,

    I like this piece. =)
    It isn't your best,
    but it's still good.

    You're super talented,
    you know.
    I love you.

    E>

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