Not much left

by isabel   Jun 5, 2007


What was sweet, now became dark
The kindness just fell apart
Not much left for me to say

Depression has changed my life
Forget thy world, take thy knife
Not much left of me, today

Empty of wisdom and of trust
In my soul, there's only dust
Not much left for you to see

Lost in love, I am a ghost
Sick of my own soul, almost
Not much left, because of thee

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  • 16 years ago

    by Loved In Hell

    So dark but very well written and thought out very much emotion was put in this piece of work keep it up 5/5
    laura

  • 16 years ago

    by David

    Different. yet so awesome! kick ass. well done. the change really made it much better and exciting.

    5/5 David

  • 16 years ago

    by LuvLyLynn

    This poem was beautifully written... I liked the rhyme and the flow... And the emotion that you put into this master piece... Keep on writing and don't stop... I hope to read more of you work... :)

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Excellently written, I like the rhyming and the flow of the poem. The repetition of "not much left" adds
    really sad atmosphere to the poem. 5/5

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