Just Leave. [Acrostic]

by Jessica   Jun 6, 2007


Jumbled thoughts finally rise to the surface,
Unleashing agony from within hidden traps,
Searing words tumble over his chapped lips,
Tearing away at her happiness, her skin it maps.

Lingering bruises mark pale skin with coal,
Everlasting scars forced into young minds,
Anguish squeezed into every crack of her soul,
Virginity lost, a mutilated heart is all he finds.
Eternally reminded that she'll never be whole.

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An Acrostic poem is where you use the first letter of a word(s) as the first letter of each line.

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  • 15 years ago

    by timothy cadwell

    Wow i realy like it!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Shadow

    Very good job on this one! :)

  • 16 years ago

    by vika

    Heyyy!!! im back on this site!! OMG!!! u are better than EVER!!! ur poems is SOOOO full of feeling...its so deep...and so amazing!! jessy ur getting better and better at this!
    luff ya
    xxxooo
    vika

  • 16 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    I love this acrostic, it just really struck me. You can feel the emotion and pain as you read through it and the imagery is great. Acrostics are a hard style to write while leaving an impact on readers, but this one is very powerful and I`m sure it leaves an impact on the readers. Great job, Hunn.

    5.5
    :]

  • 16 years ago

    by Sherry Lynn

    So much reality placed in this poem. I love the Acrostic forms. The are more complicated then they appear.

    This is just so wonderfully written and shows that you can accomplish many form of structured poetry with ease.

    --Sher

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