by Espoirfailed Jun 14, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
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You left me at the station |
by Kenny
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Great poem.... |
by Simply Josh
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Nice work. The words spoke strongly and even though the format meant that the flow wasn't that smooth, the poem still worked because of the way you wrote it. The fact that the flow was like that actually provided a better emotional read. Thanks |
by sheila
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Awesome poem keep writing ur amazing i love ur poems |
by Narphangu
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A little forced rhyming... But only one that I saw. |