Me
by Elapsed Jun 19, 2007
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Mistrust, Betrayed, lies, Miss placed faith. The anguish in me never stops. I can't believe it's just simply over. My heart burns furiously. My blood boils. My mind frays. I scream a silent scream within. Loving to much is my flaw, never wanting to give up is my drawback. Open and honest to a fault. Over and over the tune to the same old song, I'm getting older but yet none the wiser. Lost from me but not forgotten, forever to mark my soul. My world continues to crash upon me. My untold legacy leaves me guarded in my unfolding misery. The sky stays anything but blue and I can't stop thinking about you. |
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16 years ago
by Ingrid
Silent screams within.... I can totally relate to that! Well done.
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16 years ago
by Ambar
Perfect portrayal of feelings- can totally relate- thanks 4 ur comments
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16 years ago
by Megan
Aww I love this poem! <33
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16 years ago
This one is amazing O.O The emotions were so strong that they threw me into they and made me feel going through this myself all over again ^_^ Fantastic job that deserves far more then a 5 =)
Rhea -
16 years ago
Iv read a few of your poems now but i kinda like this one the best :]
i think its really deep and powerful
yet if it was put into stanzas it would be better :]
even if its not a rhyming poem having stanzas makes it easier to read
on more poem and a few rates and youl have the little 'p' to go with your 'c' XD
keep it up
