Always On My Mind

by Brittney   Jun 19, 2007


Sitting on a rock
The wind blowing in my hair
Listening to mother nature
Taking in the fresh air

I have something on my mind
It never goes away
It's a feeling deep inside of me
That grows stronger every day

Of course it's nothing bad
But the greatest feeling within
When two hearts come together
And let a new life begin

The two hearts intertwind
Becoming one together
Feeding off each other's love
A flame that will burn forever

The flame will never cease
Never die down even a bit
It became immortal
The very day it was lit

This thought of love
To me is real
For I've found the one
That let's me feel

T.J. is my soulmate
My one true love
We will spend our lives together
Just the way we have dreamed of

Though, for now I'll sit here
And take in the view
Thinking of the one dream
That I will definitely pursue

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  • 12 years ago

    by XxToWriteLoveOnHerWristxX

    Omg!! u r a great writer i love this poem (except imma change the name t.j) when i read it cuz hes yours and i like sumone else...anyway i loved it and i give it a 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Debbie

    You brought into play a refreshing setting: a nice place to daydream one's desires. I fairly believed that it fit well with the poem's ambiance as well. Really wistful and quite dreamy. I liked the little twist at the ending. An adorable piece. All the best!

  • 12 years ago

    by JaMeS

    Thats a really nice piece :) i like the way its an obvious message but also left you thinking of your own things good job and tieing in nature and your dream was a great idea!

  • 12 years ago

    by xXxSurrenderToMyWrathxXx

    This poem is so deep! You blended the words perfectly and your really good at it! You've got some serious talent!! I'm happy for you and your man, too! Plz check some of my poems!

  • 12 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Cute and sweet!

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