Your the best thing that ever happened to me
^ Should be "you're"
Awh, I really liked this. I thought it was unique the way you counted the tear dropss. I also liked the way you didn't rhyme it but it still flowed well. The descriptions were good but I think they could be improved with better vocabularyy. The only suggestion I would make would be that maybe you should change the last line. I just felt it was a bit of an anticlimax. I like the bit "with yet another" but then maybe you could think of something other than "a tear stained pillow".. I donno, that was a bit bland to me. 5/5 though, good job.