Locked Up

by That One Girl   Jun 20, 2007


There is something inside
Trying to get out
Its pushing and shoving and shouting about
"Wont you let me out?"
But I push it back down
And say "wont you quiet down?
I dont want you to reveal
Letting everyone know how I feel

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  • 16 years ago

    by Cody

    Now this one is freakin' powerful. That's what I'm talking about. You didn't say anything about what was going on literally, yet I saw your emotions vividly. Great job on this one! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSuicidalxx

    I like how you describe hidden feelings. I know how you feel cause i lock mine up too....Great poem! Very well written!

  • 16 years ago

    by Used n Confussed

    This is really good, i like it =D x x

  • 16 years ago

    by Used n Confussed

    This is really good, i like it =D x x

  • 16 years ago

    by godislove

    I LIKE IT BUT ELABORATE I REALLY DIDN T GET IT

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