If Only I Could Be Your Pillow

by IdTakeABulletForYou   Jun 24, 2007


I hope that I've done the title justice =]

If only I could be your pillow,
I would let you lay on me...
Set your head upon my soul
and stay eternally...

If only I could be your pillow,
here to catch your falling tears...
There when you are scared to death
just hold on tight
I'll fight your fears...

If only I could be your pillow,
I would ease all of your pain..
I'd make sure that you sleep well
and I'd never go away.

If I could be your pillow,
I'd listen-- Never speak.
I'd be here for you all the time,
and I would never leave.

I'd be there for the pillow fights,
and even there when you're alone.
I would ease all your neck pain,
I know I'd be the Best Pillow.

I would make you smile,
as you lay your head on me...
Looking toward another night
of happy, pleasant dreams.

If I could be your pillow,
You would fall into love with me...
I'd be so soft and so fluffy,
you'd never want to leave my side...

If I could be your pillow,
I'd never let you slip away.
Cradling your head,
to hear the things you'd never say
(to me...)

If I could be your pillow,
It would be such a dream come true
to get to soothe your pain
and spend each night
alone
with
You.

Thanks for reading,
Please Comment AND vote (or JUST comment) honestly and accordingly.

~Stephen White

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  • 7 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    S - You could be my pillow ;)
    But in all seriousness, i love this piece :)
    Very poetic, cute, real.. I especially love the lines
    If only I could be your pillow,
    here to catch your falling tears...
    There when you are scared to death
    just hold on tight
    I'll fight your fears...

    This made me tear up a little. Wanting to take someone's pain away.. Its something we all want to do for those we love..

  • 16 years ago

    by C Cattaway

    Aww.. this is a 'cute' poem.. (if you don't take offence at that).. I tried the 'pillow' line in one or two of mine.. I now feel very inadequate!! lol.. Well done.. xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Sabree

    I am in awe...this poem really speaks to me. Such love and passion you have put into your poetry, it reminds me of my earlier times when i had the urge to write. Now i am in a state of writers block. I am glad to see that you are not. Your poetry speaks more than any thing you could say in person...your writings show your world. That i love. Your word choice is immpecable, and your grammar is grand. The message it sends out is amazing. I must say that you are a breath of fresh air. Keep on writing and you will go far. I shall give you a rare 5/5 for this one...

    -sabree

    P.S- IS there a certain boy this is for? If it is...then he is very lucky. Always keep your loved ones in mind when writing poetry. Many of mine are of ex girlfriends and boyfriends.

  • 16 years ago

    by unknown

    I really love this lines. ^^
    "I'd be there for the pillow fights,
    and even there when you're alone.
    I would ease all your neck pain,
    I know I'd be the Best Pillow."
    Very very beautiful poem... ^^
    I'm the 2nd voter and I give you 5/5, I don't know the 1st voter who give you 4/5. But I think it's really excellent..^^

  • 16 years ago

    by Loved In Hell

    Very truthful i really like this one 5/5 like it alot very powerful
    laura

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