Cupids Arrow

by Finalgravedigger   Jul 4, 2007


Cupids arrow

I fly high
soar into the endless sky
cupids arrow strikes and
so I die.

With one arrow thats all it
takes, that black evil thing
pointy with poison inside
breaks me down and so i hit the ground.

Laying there on the ground
blood drips out
fallen wings
leaves feathers about.

Cupid takes his prey
and drags it along the way.
He has something to eat tonight.
A broken heart is his favorite part.

(Plz vote and comment)

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  • 16 years ago

    by xxSilentlyScreamingxx

    I like the way you twisted cupid to be the evil one, its original and it works really well...great poem

    Amy x

  • 16 years ago

    by xXxBrOkEnAnGeLxXx

    I love where your coming from in this poem. you have a realli unique way of writing. keep up the great work
    shell x

  • 16 years ago

    by devintwinkletoes

    I like this one.
    Just one thing, isn't cupid supose to be a nice guy?
    Lol.

  • 16 years ago

    by Krzysztof J

    I really enjoyed reading this poem :) it just goes to show that cupids arrow is a double edged sword just like love is :( i gave this poem 5/5 :) its great :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Liz

    Dude that was like.... GREAT!!!!

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