That boy

by elana   Jul 11, 2007


That boy he made me smile
he made me forget my pain for a while
I loved the way he held me close
he was my posion and I need another dose
I loved feeling his touch
he let go even though I wanted him to hold on so much
why would anyone ever want to hold on to me
I'm never good enough for anyone to want to keep
I wonder if I'll ever see him again
and if I do will he even recognize me then
I liked him so much he drove me crazy
I thought I could keep him...maybe..just maybe
I know I have to forget about him and let him go
but hes not worth forgetting and I really dont want to
I took the risk and lost it all
I just hope in the end it'll be worth the fall

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  • 13 years ago

    by Kayla

    My my... this is just, a very beautiful poem sweetie! I loved every single line, I can't tell you how well I can relate to this. I had someone just like the boy in this poem, someone that used to hold me so close.. say that he loved me and he meant everything to me. Then out of nowhere he just threw it all away, like I was nothing. Anyways.. this is just an amazingly written poem Elana! It is filled with so much saddness and pain. Great job, please keep up the wonderful work! 5/5 <3 <3

    ~Loveless Nights~

  • 13 years ago

    by Espoirfailed

    I liked the line

    he was my posion and I need another dose

    that was very vivid and had great connotations, amazing!

    however, i feel that as the poem progressed you ran out of ideas almost. the ending wasn't as powerful as the beginning and i lost interest. on the contrary it was quite raw which was good.

    4/5
    xx