Heart for Sale

by Ixora   Jul 14, 2007


She's waiting for a smile
An ounce of urge to fight
Seems like there's no one left
to hold her hand real tight

Her tear falls into an empty ocean
So easy it is to replace
It drowns into the dirt and hides
Into the shadows of her face

Glancing at the people around her
Dissapointment only resides
She turns her eyes away from them
Remembers why she hides

Her heart while once was afraid of breaking
Now no longer cares
Unusual how the pieces lose
The words that once were theirs

All alone she prepares to dissapear
Watching her soul turn pale
Leaving nothing of her to remember
But the heart she left for sale

-i actually kind of tried on this one...so yeay or nay?

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  • 15 years ago

    by HOLLYBXBE

    This is amazing hun! It's one of my top faves<3 I can totally relate...well not at the moment but ive felt exactly like that! you're so talented wifey<3

  • 16 years ago

    by amber

    First off thanks for the comment on mine. yes every woman in my family went through that and i did one time. But that one time he also walked away with a busted nose (i lie you not) So i'm the one that doesn't stand for it and i'm trying to show the younger generation of my siblings that they too, should stand up for themselves and let no man try and run over them.
    ~*~Anywho~*~
    this was a really great poem. I loved the imagery and i love the emotion. I give it a YAY lol it was really good. and what do you mean you actually tried??? i'd like to read something you haven't tried on and see how good it is lol you're really good. Keep writing and never give up. i hope to read more from you.....and keep me posted on your new stuff and keep a check up on mine lol
    thanks :)
    ~*~Amber~*~

  • 16 years ago

    by kristen

    I REALLY REALLY like this poem...i can connect with it...& it is so wonderfully written!! i can tell that you just let loose and didnt think too hard about what you were writing and it flows PERFECTLY!!!! 5/5!!! :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Dan

    I love the poem good work.. very touching and you should keep writin let the emotions flow through you into your poetry and the greatness will ensue

  • 16 years ago

    by damaged rose

    Ohh i really like it and its very touching especially when it comes to the depressing part =)