You Played With My Heart

by Kristina   Jul 14, 2007


You were the best boyfriend I ever had,
You treated me so nicely,
Acted like you cared about me,
But then I found out stuff you were hiding.
You went behind my back
And you got with other girls,
You thought it was something you could do,
But babe it was totally wrong.

It hurt me so much,
I can't believe you did that to me,
I loved you so much,
You were my world,
You know you were all I had,
And now I have no one to count on,
I thought we would always be together,
But things never seem to go my way.

Copyright © June 08, 2007 - Kristina M

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  • 16 years ago

    by MaSkEdSoUl

    I'm pretty sure all girls HATE it when guys do that, they need to think more. Anyways this was a really good poem, but I think it could've flowed better. The structure was well thought out. Overall it was pretty good. Keep it up!

  • 16 years ago

    by Beauty In The Breaking

    Great poem that flows great and has great wording ^_^ It bugs the heck out of me how many guys do that GGRRR Anyway I'm sorry you ever had to go through that kind of pain =( I know you don't deserve it =( Hope your ok ^_^ 5/5
    Rhea

  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie Naylor

    I thought this was an ok poem
    it just seemed that you
    through some lines together

    and yes they have some meaning behind
    them but i think it could be stronger, 4/5

  • 16 years ago

    by crystaljean88

    I can totally relate to this.. very nice work.. the poem seemed kinda forced thought.. but the wording was nice. i rate this a 5

  • 16 years ago

    by SuicideQueen

    Unfortunetly this is incredibly true, men have a habit of making women feel like crap... i really hope you strangled the bloke ^_^ very nice poem as well hun 5/5 xxxx