Trapped

by Michelle18   Jul 16, 2007


I try to fit in,
But I dont belong.
So I sit and stare in silence,
Listening to sad songs.
Why do people see the bad in me,
They never see the good.
If I had the chance to go back,
I probably would.
Because Im trapped inside of this unknown person,
I cant escape, theres just no way.
I've tried and tried,
Every single day.
I feel like Im falling apart,
Like my body's been zapped.
I cant get away,
I guess I'll always be trapped

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  • 16 years ago

    by JaMeS

    Very nice i feel that way sometimes its horrible and as someone said to me people always see the bad because they are constantly trying to find fault in others its human nature!! anyway hey you said comment one or the other so i thought id do both :)...

  • 16 years ago

    by Mousie

    Another good poem, i enjoyed it. beautiful write, you're very talented. your poems carry a lot of emotion and weight to them. wonderful job.

  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie Naylor

    This poem had so much emotion in it

    it was great

    It was short and to the point
    i mean the flow was magnificent
    a great read

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Kirsty palmer

    Awww this is such a good, strong poem, you really captured me .. you upheld something that most of us at one point feel, but you wrote it beautifully and poeticaly/ i could really feel the emotion and pain in this poem. very well done!
    xXx

  • 16 years ago

    by Si sI

    I love this poem

    very good job.. very sad and i love sad poems... ican relate to this one to.. :)

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