It

by Rose not your average   Jul 16, 2007


Creeping in the darkness,
They stalk you,
Only if you knew,
The damage it does,
The horrid things.
The fear it gives.
They watch you,
Waiting for the perfect timing,
To jump out,
And end it all

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  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Wow, this is very effective and powerful. You said so much with so little words, which is excellent. Atmosphere is great, haunting, and the whole piece is very unique.

  • 16 years ago

    by Kayla Kay

    Great job.It's short but it definetly gets the point across.Every word I read I inched closer to my computer monitor.lol.Keep up the good writing..

  • 16 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    Ooooh! Very creeeeppppyyyy. I love how it leaves it a mystery as to what exactly you're talking about. It was exellent! I can't believe I'm the first to comment on it! :) Great job! :)
    ~Midnight Sun
    P.S. Thanks for the comment btw! :) Always appreciated!

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