Why do you cut? #2

by Rose not your average   Jul 19, 2007


What does it do for you?
Do you even have a clue?
Why do you do it?
Why do you give yourself a slit?

Why do you watch the blood pour out?
Whats it all about?
Do you feel lost?
Its going to cost.

Youre just murdering yourself!

Why are you giving up?

You never talk,
Only to mock.
What did you turn into?
You still have no clue!

Why do you write words with blood?
Then act like a stud.
Whats your story?
Youre not going to get glory.

Youre just going to die,
And it makes me cry.
I care,
But you just glare.

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  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    This is very deep and powerful, fulled with emotions. I like the way you wrote it, I could feel your emotions in every stanza, and you used punctuation greatly. This is my favorite one from you. The topic is good, too.

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    Very interesting poem. It is too similar with first part but atmosphere in this one is excellent too. I don't like some lines but except few words this poem is great.

  • 16 years ago

    by Mandz and Aly

    This one caught my eye i liked it i know where you are coming from cutting is pointless...trust me...i know....always Manda

  • 16 years ago

    by Riley

    I think the rhyming is a bit rushed with the aabb pattern, I think this poem would flow very nicely if you changed it to the ABAB pattern.
    Maybe if you used a little more detail then the aabb pattern would work, but it just seems a bit short for that because most of your lines have 2-5 words in it.
    I like the story though.

  • 16 years ago

    by Serina the Squid

    A bit cheesy, lol. But I like it. The thing is people don't cut because they want to die and it doesn't mean they want to commit suicide. They just want to release some of the pain they're in. No one want to die, only to escape immense pain.

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