Hidden Anguish

by Kirsty palmer   Jul 20, 2007


Anguish inside my hidden soul
Repelling all the times I was hurt
Love stricken by your words;
Left with feelings I had to convert
Love turned to hate as I sat there,
Wishing and waiting to be free
Alone and under nourished-
You still were unable to see.
My hidden anguish is soon to fracture
As you continue to underestimate
I can not force a smile anymore
You have left me like this; in a state
As my heart soon forms its holes
I lay there slowly dieing away
The blood was left to drip from my wrist
As in this world I will no longer stay

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  • 18 years ago

    by TwiztidJuggalette

    I liked this poem...It was very truly written well and the emotions in here were just amaizng....Really good read...

    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Intoxic8dBeautyxXHaNaXx

    I like this poem very much. It was concise but had pithiness. The words are so well putted and the emotions in every line were perfectly portrayed. I really loved it and find it to be really good. Good job.

  • 18 years ago

    by Debbie

    ^another typo! my apologies. xox

    "How the character is liable to committing suicide..." is what I truly meant to say. :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Debbie

    *is, I mean... not rough. Apologies for the typo and double post. :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Debbie

    It's saddening to note how the character are liable to committing suicide due to certain problems in life and relationships. This piece pertained much to modern society. There was, once again, a minor issue with the overall flow. It's quite rough of certain areas. But then, again... this work is truly worthy of note. Nice one, nevertheless.

    Marian

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