It Makes Me Wish (My Dream was This)

by IdTakeABulletForYou   Jul 22, 2007


Impossible places to
{kiss you (on your lips)} make me want to
{hold you (in my arms)}
and Cradle you eternally
so that you never will leave me.

Hope has a hold of my
future (without you).
My dreams promise things
(that reality cannot bring).
My heart beats with
time that slowly passes by
(yet my eyes are hidden from the clock
so that the clock can't see me peer,
and with each second
Wish
You
Here).

Only smiles seem warm to me
than before I bore a frown...
Dependent upon a dream
that wasn't ever written down...

It's hope that holds my neck so tight
{I twist}
{I turn}
(I try to fight)...
It's you...
It's you...
(You weigh me down...)
Placed on my soul, pound after pound...
It's you my burden,
You I bear....
The empty presence
(I can't wear.)

It's you
{your lips (I cannot kiss)}
It makes me wish
(My dream was
This.)

What I mean by "It makes me wish the my dream was this" is basically stating "I wish this dream was reality and reality were a dream or a nightmare." =] Got it?

Thanks for reading. Please comment honestly and accordingly, no votes necessary.

~Stephen White

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  • 16 years ago

    by EssenceOfLace

    If this poem was any longer, i would have passed out and killed some brain cells because this poem made me hold my breath through the whole thing. im adding this to my favorite poems
    MWAH!
    and you have already commented on some of my poems, but if there is one you havent, go ahead. it does not matter to me! i prefer yours over mine anyday!

    http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/author.html?id=107073

    ^^ there is the link to my profile, even though you can just click on my name, but, i put the support thing in my profile, even though you already know i support it!
    <3
    The Devil

  • 16 years ago

    by Karin Erlacher

    With the situation I am in right now, this fits perfect for the way I feel. It was written really well btw. I loved the whole thing.

    *Jayde*

  • 16 years ago

    by ABake

    I loved the overall idea of this.
    The way you set this up, and by that I mean I was the stanzas were, added a lot of effect on the reader.
    Although your flow was spuratic I still liked it a lot.
    Great job!
    5/5

    XxAmberxX

  • 16 years ago

    by Emma

    Wow i really love how you write. its very unique. loved the poem=) it has so much emotion in it!

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany

    I LOVE this. I'm definitely putting it in my favourites. It's...a GORGEOUS poem. I just love the concept. It's adorable. Sorry about getting mushy but I seriously think it's amazing.
    Please keep writing. You have major talent.

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