This Girl Is Me

by AmberSherrellxxIve Been Sitting Here Trying To Find Myselfxx   Jul 23, 2007


I see a young girl with a frown on her face
Her once beautiful gown is now blood-covered lace
Her once bright eyes are drained lifeless now
And I know why&I know how
A crimson stained razor is grasped in her hand
On her wrist she wears the death band
It's carved deep and all around
She didn't scream, made no sound
I know her pain&know how she feels
She finally decided to end life's deal
A young dying girl is what I see
Take a look closer,this girl is me!

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  • 16 years ago

    by jLegendc

    A short yet beautifully said poem... i've read a lot with the same topic but yours have different words... i still like it though.. but i really love ur poem a sad girl's prayer.. now that a masterpiece! alryt l8er =D

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    Wonderful
    this poem jumped out at me in realization
    I too have many poems similar to this
    && it really hits home for me
    I think everything in this poem
    was pretty much right on
    flow, rhyme, vocab
    everything was great!
    5/5
    kaila

  • 16 years ago

    by despodreamer

    Excellent poem..shows real emotions.
    earnestly,its brilliant!!

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSuicidalxx

    Beautiful poem! I loved it! Very unique ....awesome poem! loved it! keep it up!

  • 16 years ago

    by kelly tavern

    This poem is like your seeing i through a third persons perspective its really good and has a good flow to it. Its also good that you don't do it for real, as i think far too many people do but its good that your expressing your feelings in words rather than actions 4/5

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