Ocean blue

by WiNgS Of StEeL   Jul 23, 2007


I had a dream last night,
One that I don't ordinarily have.
I dreamt of this wonderful place,
By the Ocean Blue.
With sun filled dandelions,
And I was laying next to you.

I was next to my baby!,
My wonderful and brilliant man,
The one who I would call my own,
And he would someday take my hand.

I dreamt that we were married.
Right there near that ocean blue,
With that ring you put on my finger,
I smiled and whispered "I Do"

My eyes met yours
And I was a prisoner in your hold,
You were taking me to a very special place,
One that cannot be told.

As the sun glistened in your eyes,
I knew that this must be,
That truly in my heart
You were meant for me.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Devon

    Your such an awesome writer, Bree! My idol :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Kalgalath

    That would be a great dream. The flow was reall great.

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    This piece is truely beautiful. So expressive and effectively penned. The flow and the emotions seem very real :)

    My eyes met yours
    And I was a prisoner in your hold

    The best lines in this piece 5/5
    Tc

  • 16 years ago

    by Crystal Gaze

    Word's flow from a talented writter, and paint a beautiful picture within my head.

    This peice was amazing.
    Happiness just seeped from this peice.
    It really show's off your talent,
    Keep it up,
    Elaine.

  • 16 years ago

    by Serina the Squid

    Wow! Amazing! The funny thing is, when I first started reading this poem it didn't seem to me like it was going to flow or even rhyme, but you did a great job! 5/5 but the stanza before the last sounds a bit forced.

    Good job! :)

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