Special friend

by WiNgS Of StEeL   Jul 29, 2007


You are my spacial friend
one that i can call my own,
we shared our most secret of secrets
promises they'd never be told.

Joy and pain we have shared together,
though in the end
i know our memories will endeavor.

sleepless nights
terrible frights,
you were always there.

no one to turn to no one was there.
but you my wonderful bub
you seemed to truly care.

though down and out
my mind seemed to wonder,
but you always brought me back
onetime for my midnight slumber.

ill care for you my one and only bub
through the times that might seem rough.
well put our hands together
and come out on top:D

this is for one of my special friends....he has helped me alto and i wanted to show him that i care for him:D

tk care

plz comment and vote
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  • 16 years ago

    by chind

    Aww thats so sweeet !
    this poem is great !
    definately =]

    5/5

    xo.louiii

  • 16 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Aww this is sweet...friendship poems always cheer me up when im feeling down.. and this one is great..

    "promises they'd never be told."

    ^^maybe its just me but in this line i think "promises" should be "promised"

    but thats just what i think. it would sound better.

    but overall this is a great poem.5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Very nice tribute to your friend ( bub? what kind of name is that??)

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 16 years ago

    by Angie

    Isn't it wonderful to know you have a friend like that! Someone who will always be there no matter what.... I'm sure he knows how much you appreciate him. Well done.

  • 16 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    It's really amazing to know that somebody cares for you so much, and the only thing greater is knowing you feel the same for them. Excellent job 5/5 GG23

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