My (dream) world

by SuicideNotes2Poems   Jul 23, 2007


My life is a maze
I'm spiraling down
getting deeper and deeper
into the ground
i am in an uncharted world
that i know all to well
the place Ware people bleed black
and descend to hell
a place Ware evil roams
it is a place i call home
ware the dead still moan
and Ware I'm never alone
it is a place i feel happy
to bad its only a dream
i will stay in bed
forever it seems

Ricky

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  • 18 years ago

    by TillyMariex

    This is an ~amazing~ and true poem.

    i rrly like it.

    ~Shantisa~<3

  • 18 years ago

    by xXxXhes the everything i cudve asked forXxXx

    I really liked this poem...so short and simple but still so strong and powerful. i loved it. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    I know how you feel! I go through this all the time! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Noelle Wright

    OWOWowOW the end is sad to bad its a dream..=[

  • 18 years ago

    by HaileyHelen

    Ricky!OMG Ily soooooo much 4 this poem!i loved it my new fav of urs!!!

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