Dont stay

by Rose not your average   Jul 31, 2007


Dont stay

We fought too much.
You lied to often,
You never did soften.
You broke my heart.

I thought I could trust you
But nothing was true!
You walked right out!
You put me in so much doubt.

Now you want to come back.
Now you say youâ??re sorry.
Now you say you will try!
Dont stay!

Get out.
Just leave!
I dont want anything to do with you!
You caused too much pain!

You made me feel great,
But now I donâ??t know what to think.
Or who to trust
Just donâ??t stay.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Kalee

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    Kalee

  • 16 years ago

    by Riley

    I really liked the beginning, but mid way through the poem the structure started to fall apart.
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  • 16 years ago

    by blueknight

    Wow great piece a sad one , ilove the idea and the flow I feel the emotion through it well penned poem keep it up

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