Dual Twilight

Hi.. i've read this one while you and cursedlies where still working on this one and i already admire it..It was really awesome..the imagination, flow and the emotions. over all a perfect art of your heart..Keep it up

Wow that was great I liked how it all rymed 4 outta 5 :)

Omg, I absolutely loved this poem.. you have no idea! It all rhymed and it all made sense.. two immortals fighting to the death even though no one will win but they won't give up. I think it was fantastic, such a great job and I loved every single line of it!! Keep up the excellent work.. tell me if you need something else commented on. 5/5 <3 <3

~Loveless Nights~

5/5 excellent poem...interesting to read, interesting to see a rhyming pattern. keep it up

I absolutly loved it...perfect picture in my mind...verry well done...5!!