Shrouded in gloom
by ben thompson Aug 4, 2007
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Shrouded in gloom |
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16 years ago
by Kellie
WOW this is brilliant writing 5/5
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16 years ago
by natalie
Hi this is a brilliant poem keep up gd wrk
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16 years ago
by Veamm
Well..well you the words buddy..nice job..no comment at all..5/5 for it..keep it up..read my piece too if you have the time^^
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16 years ago
by debbylyn
Short bursting lines....to the point and deep....very nice!
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16 years ago
by Cindy
Ben
What a deep powerful piece you have penned. The imagery is very dark and intense.
Shrouded in gloom
By myself I bleed
Dizziness sets in
Lost in my disease
These lines really cut deep into the soul.
Excellent job!
Love Cindy
