Juicy Fruit to Juicy Passion

by luv Shelbz luv   Aug 4, 2007


That day you asked me for some gum
I knew we were meant to be
Staring into your eyes and looking quite dumb

That Juicy Fruit eventually turned
Into a Juicy Passion
Because I knew our love I had earned

We had our firsts, together we shared
a hug, a kiss, a gentle nudge
I knew you were one of the ones that cared

You let me in you life
Which shockingly surprised me because in my
heart I knew you wouldn't stab me with the knife

I thank God for Juicy Fruit
And that I had some in my purse because
Without it we wouldn't have grown to this root

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  • 16 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Lol.
    It was funny and sweet. its like a two for one combo and McDonalds.. =]

    I think it was so cute that the relationship was formed by gum.. thats not a story you hear everyday.
    it was good.
    keep it up.
    xoxo
    --Chelsey

  • 16 years ago

    by xoxkatrinaxox

    I like this one too...

  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    Not only was it sweet, but it also was an out-of-the-ordinary metaphor that you employed: a juicy fruit passion, so to speak. I liked it.

  • 16 years ago

    by nikki

    Wow. i never knew you could have a relationship over juicy fruit, but it was sweet. i liked it alot and thought it was beautifully portrayed. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    Haha, a relationship stemming from Juicy Fruit: nice. This was an... intriguing read, I must say. It was interested; kind of fun, in a way. I liked it, it made me happy reading it.

    Good job, sweetie.

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