I didn't mean it like that

by luv Shelbz luv   Sep 16, 2007


You were the smile
That got me through the day
I took it for granted
And made sunshine into rain

I paid you no mine
And let you slip away
I think about it now
I didn't mean to be so cold

The wrong time and wrong place
I should've waited for you
But it just didn't go that way
I'm sorry for the way I am

You deserve so much more
That a girl so untrue
Someone who didn't know
The real person who was you

You are still the joke
That makes me laugh
I hope that you find
that person for you
which is me!

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  • 16 years ago

    by Chelsey

    I loved this poem.
    Your young and you already have so much talent.. when i was your age I couldn't even fine something to rhyme with pain.. Thats the truth.
    Poetry was definitely not my forte when i was your age, but your just great at it.
    Good job.. =]
    xoxo
    --Chelsey

  • 16 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    Good poem. Most of it was excellent but not the last stanza. It seems a bit rushed. The structure was jumbled because you added one extra line to that stanza which messed up the flow.
    But overall this was a good poem and I liked your choice of words. I can relate to parts of it as well.
    4/5

    -Shannon <3

  • 16 years ago

    by Syndicate

    I don't know what to say except that I love this poem! :D 5/5 *adds to favs*

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