Softball
by luv Shelbz luv Aug 4, 2007
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Up to bat |
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16 years ago
by Chelsey
It was different, I dont see many poems like it.
But it was still good.
yet another pom that proves you have talent.
keep it up.
xoxo
--Chelsey -
16 years ago
Good poem. Very unique and I love how it is different. I already knew you loved softball but I didn't think you'd write a poem about it :P. I loved the onomateopias(sound words like whoosh) in it as well.
Great Job on this. 5/5
-Shannon <3 -
16 years ago
by LiNa
Love softball so i loved the poem love you
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16 years ago
by Debbie
Such a succinct depiction of a softball game. The use of certain sounds and actions definitely brought fair justice with this piece. Pretty.
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16 years ago
by Fsams
Unique and the flow is great and fun. The way words strung makes it a cohesive poem. 5/5 all the way
