I Hate you

by luv Shelbz luv   Sep 16, 2007


I hate everything about you
Your mind, heart, and soul
From top to bottom
everything to know

From you laugh to you tears
To the way you show your fears
I see you and wish to
choke the life out of you face

But I love you
Know matter what they say
The way you look at me
Makes me want to faint

Those lips of yours
Look so soft
I wish to put mine to yours
And taste them

I want to know you
Everything there is to know
but yet I can't
because I hate you

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  • 16 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Doesn't it just suck when the one you love is also the one that you hate?
    Like when the person that your in love with is just so mean and has hurt you so many times?
    I do!
    I completely despise it.
    =]
    anyways.
    It was a good poem.. it definitely showed how you were feeling.

    xoxo
    --CHelsey

  • 16 years ago

    by Liz

    U cant hate the one u love

    hate is not something u should even do espeacailly to the one u "love"

    so how can u say i cant bc i hate u if b4 u said i love u

  • 16 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    Nice idea. Love how you made the switch from hate to love. The flow was on key and it was nicely written. Powerful feeling.

  • 16 years ago

    by Syndicate

    You did a great job, especially the way you described your feelings! keep it up!

  • 16 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    Good poem. Wonderfully written. I loved the twist in it. How you went from hate to love. I've felt like this before. This poem flow was flawless and it is well put together.
    Good Job. 5/5

    -Shannon <3

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