Dangling roses

Okay... I don't think I have to say anything because your poem said it all... WOW, that was beautiful, I am in love with that poem!! it was so beautifully written, I don't know what more to say cos I don't have enough words to describe how talented you are!!

You're good at making your words flow, "Once alive
flourished over my head like light
I was safe at night
with roses by my side." your writing just flows. I really like it. Also could you read one of my poems and give me some feed back?

Damn I really like this poem..deep and makes me think....dont ever stop doin what ur doin....=)...

I'm in two minds about this poem
One the one hand i love the concept of love taunting an individual and you accurately give off the impression of love as a cruel notion as well as the wondrous thing it is as well.
However, I'm not so keen on the rhyme scheme, part of it seems a bit too forced for me and i think you should try not to rhyme for the sake of rhyme.
but all in all i like it as a poem and kudos for the idea

I'll give you 4/5 (cause i'm a mean critic) but I do like it and thanks for your comment on my poem :)

all the best
Sondos

I like this poem i like the end, even tho its draws you in. 4/5