Accepting The Reality (collab)

by Goran Rahim   Aug 9, 2007


Its true that you have left my life
And that I miss you very much
From your words ever so sweet
To the tenderness of your touch

Yet I accept the reality
That you are not mine anymore.
Your eyes don't gaze at me,
The same eyes that I adore.

That reality is unfortunate
And it brings me much pain
It torments my very soul
I've gone completely insane

Only if you know how I felt
How much I have cried for you.
Yet the heart is not learning,
Learning to live without you.

* collab with Raveena,

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  • 16 years ago

    by Alissa

    This poem was so heartfelt and so raw, it was amazing. The flow was flawless and the words you chose, it seemed to fit so perfectly. It was amazing, I loved it!

  • 16 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    In the last stanza, know should be knew, I think. Anyway, this was beautiful and full of wonderfuly expressed emotions. Nice flow as well. 5/5

    marcella

  • 16 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    This is really sad. I loved it. It was very emotional and touching. You two did an excellent job with this poem. 5/5

    -Shannon <3

  • 16 years ago

    by Letty

    This is so beautiful Goran, I am nearly in tears. This poem was full of such loving emotion and just the right touch of sadness. You never cease to amaze me with your ability to bring words to life. Keep up the wonderful work hun. 5/5

    P.S This is going in my favorite poems list

  • 16 years ago

    by Crystal Gaze

    The flow was smooth, and the emotion true.
    I loved this peice of your talent.
    You did a wonderful job with Raveena and I applaud your guys work.
    Well done,
    Elaine. 5/5

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